Pop Trance (Unfinished, very unsure of it, please comment) by GorbachevLovesYou

Go to: http://synthesizer-tutorial.com/ to learn how program your own sounds, superior to any soundsets and uniquely yous own. The tutorial is written entirely by me, though section 2 is very unedited, section 3 and 4 have not been written and there are not pictures or sound clips yet.

This is a mixdown of a new project. I am very unsure of it. There is something I don't like that I can't put my finger on. Please comment and help make the track better.

All synthesizer sounds are custom programmed from scratch (a raw sawtooth patch) by myself on an Access Virus Ti2 Desktop.
Drums are made with Native Instruments Maschine MKII .
Reverbs are made with a TC Electronic Powercore PCI MKII
The track is recorded/arranged/mixed in Cubase Studio 5.
Please Comment.