BIG BIRD by Steve Low published on 2013-02-04T03:46:55Z Written from the perspective of a child in an Afganistani village. BIG BIRD There’s a smoky trail across the sky Behind the big bird as he flies I’m running waving both hands free But my mommas come to capture me My mom she’s got this thing you see About the bird we don’t agree She don’t like his fiery tail She’s gonna capture me and go to jail Big bird flying across the sky I don’t know you or your reasons why Big bird do you come to play Mommas got bad things to say about you We been here a thousand years Momma says that you don’t care Your fireworks that light the streets Make houses fall to dust and heat The baker man went yesterday A puff of smoke, an empty tray I kind of liked your flashing bomb But Momma ranted all night long From STEVE LOW CD BLUE NOTES ETC Genre Folk-rock Comment by Steve Low @phil-mcwalter: Thanks Phil it is quite a visual song 2013-04-27T20:51:19Z Comment by Phil McWalter Good lyrics, good song, favourited! 2013-04-27T18:12:41Z Comment by Phil McWalter I really like this laconic melody and delivery, has a touch of freedom and big skies seeded in there before the bomb drops. Nicely done. 2013-04-27T12:28:15Z Comment by sksskh Beautiful.... Great lyrics on all your songs! 2013-03-14T19:36:27Z Comment by The Subversive @stevelowsongs: nice of you to say mate, i guess i just stumbled upon a formula that works for me, most of my arrangements are really quiet simple and going to music college as a mature student defo helped the cause 2013-02-27T17:01:11Z Comment by Steve Low @the-subversive: That's high praise thanks. You're a fine writer yourself and your arranging skills leave me for dead. Steve 2013-02-26T09:20:24Z Comment by The Subversive @stevelowsongs: you're a great songwriter mate, the words flow real good, your up there with my other two favorit songwriters brianp and jm 2013-02-24T14:08:20Z Comment by DT ANOTHER GOOD SONG STEVE 2013-02-24T00:08:12Z Comment by Steve Low @milanazilnik: Thanks Milana 2013-02-23T10:21:10Z Comment by Steve Low @davidmcwilliams: Great cerebral function 2013-02-23T10:20:47Z Comment by Steve Low @pau-14: Thanks Paul 2013-02-23T10:19:56Z Comment by Steve Low @e-butler-music: Cheers EBM 2013-02-23T10:19:27Z Comment by Steve Low @markjbennett: Thanks Mark. you put a great effort into feedback and it's much appreciated steve 2013-02-23T10:18:53Z Comment by David Mcwilliams @stevelowsongs: See? I was right. They are memorable, I still remember :) 2013-02-22T20:20:37Z Comment by markjbennett Hi Steve, Well worth your persistence on this gem. Powerful commentary from a child's position of innocence, puts all of this into perspective for all of us. Lovely and unusual changes makes this feel very fresh. Love the dynamic the organ is adding to those great guitar lines. You are also in good voice here, no doubt because you believe in it. Stunning post. Cheers, Mark 2013-02-20T10:07:31Z Comment by Paul Janszen Love the folky vibe and words, your voice is wonderful here. 2013-02-19T14:53:47Z Comment by E. Butler Music Great song, Steve! 2013-02-17T04:43:22Z Comment by Steve Low @bobolives: Remember reading about the las years ago but have not yet heard them 2013-02-15T09:07:44Z Comment by Steve Low @pretzelsmalone: Cheers it finally came together 2013-02-15T09:03:34Z Comment by Steve Low @cathie-fredrickson: well I didn't want to finger the USA specifically but . . . . 2013-02-15T09:01:13Z Comment by Steve Low @thanks j d I appreciate your comment 2013-02-15T08:59:45Z Comment by Milana Zilnik Great catchy song Steve! With a strong message 2013-02-14T19:28:26Z Comment by Cathie Fredrickson Yes, so sad, you can have the USA big in that tag of war, bomber....... makes me sad, but such true lyrics... your voice is wonderful on this Steve and love the instrumental work... Top Shelf!!!!! 2013-02-14T02:28:16Z Comment by jd185 Fine vocal treatment, and nice arrangement ! 2013-02-12T09:55:59Z Comment by pretzels malone such a soft sound. nice folking :) 2013-02-09T04:17:40Z Comment by Steve Low @brianpeters-3: Kind words thanks. World weary is a good description Steve 2013-02-07T18:21:44Z Comment by Steve Low @brianpeters-3: Kind words thanks. World weary is a good description Steve 2013-02-07T18:07:45Z Comment by Steve Low @brianpeters-3: Kind words thanks. World weary is a good description Steve 2013-02-07T18:07:03Z Comment by brianpeters well, maybe 4 goes was what it needed...cos the world-weary delivery is perfect, imho, steve...carried me away, this, like a big bird..wonderful lyric :) 2013-02-07T14:25:42Z Comment by Bobo Lives! Like your harmonies. Love your lyrics and guitar playing, reminds me of the La's a bit, it's great! :) 2013-02-07T09:46:12Z