Killsong by LivveLive published on 2013-04-25T03:26:07Z This is a song I literally wrote just last night (April 23rd), so it's (OBVIOUSLY) still in the works, needs lots of touching up, and this is really only the beginning of a bigger ensemble. The guitar part was inspired entirely by Led Zepplin's own Jimmy Page, especially when he whips out a mandolin, a 12-string... or, a violin bow. ;) As for the lyrics and vocals, I've been pretending to be Jim Morrison all week, but it doesn't look like it's working yet... maybe I need cooler pants? So, for feedback, I would dig something constructive, because that's what I need. Thank you for automatically joining my cult by listening to my satanic murder song, Livve Dae LYRICS At the end of the day, I am tired But I forfeit sleep for sweet surrender A long day's display of a boy's cold shoulder Can take up your whole world And (not to mention) number after wrong, wrong, wrong number Will I ever remember that face again? That permanent smug, stained with love For no-one else but himself He's an open book, an open book left on a dusty shelf Will I ever remember? Me thinks she'd rather suffer! Me thinks she'd rather rupture! Hello, sweet amnesia... Me thinks she'd rather MURDER him! And take his life... Tonight.