The Morning After

Haven't recorded vocals or guitars for it yet. Working on making a skeleton for the track first. Any criticism is more than welcome, since this is a bit of an endeavor that i'm taking on.

She spent the night cleaning the blood
Tediously caring, all the while swearing
Was it worth it in the end?
Now she’s lost one of her friends?
No.
She told the town she left with just a note
Something she had wrote down as an afterthought, it seemed
Revelations no one dreamed
She’s gone, flew high
Took off, no goodbye
She left home (bye bye)
They had fallen for her lie
Sweating as she baked
Triumph as they ate the pony they now grieved
And mourned but soon the town would rest their tired eyes
And no surprise within a week the town moved on
The worry gone, except for one
She theorized, hypothesized
Regrettably she came to see
The fault might lay on one pony
And so began our tragic story
What comes next is dark and gory
Horrors of the fatal dreamers
Not the squeamish or the screamers
Take precaution, heed what’s said
Learn the lessons of the dead
Shedding tears and words unspoken
A perfect circle; forever
Broken

Smile once for me, would you
Nothing you can’t do
Let me remember what it was like
To live without fear
To smile ear to ear
Those days are now gone, no more shall the light
Brighten my day, the shadows are engulfing all that has past
Now that she is gone, through madness and insanity, have I found my peace at last?

What caused her to leave here
All that she held dear
What's going on? they don't have a clue
Friends feel rejected
One they protected
Now ran away - what are they to do?

Silently the lies are piling,
Keeping them from restoration
Ponies around growing tired
Of Twilight's investigation
Pinkie on the other hand
was trying hard at acting fine
Intensely faking everything
To go unpunished for her crime

But, here in the town, everypony else moves on with their lives
They all passed unaware of the horrors that took place right before their eyes!

(intense dueling solo)

Now, sitting in silence
Stained by the violence
No pony's sure of what now to do
Pinkie is silent, twilight defiant
Everyone else they don't have a clue
After a week, everypony else moved on with their lives
Alone in the dark, pinkie couldn't help but wish their demise