Airbender WIP 7/3/12

shallows dump on July 03, 2012 21:35

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Random stuff because i couldn't sleep. not very good. seriously i made this out of boredom it's bad

Updated version of this track. Still unfinished, but now I have a full structure. Go ahead and leave comments for how you think it could improve.

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  • shallows dump
    shallows dump at 1.40 on July 04, 2012 22:05

    @Draft34: Those clicks got there when I exported the song as a WAV, I know how to fix it. No worries :)

  • Draft34
    Draft34 at 3.34 on July 04, 2012 00:08

    I love the drop, but I think you can take it farther. I think it would be really cool to make the piano recede into the distance for a moment before the drums come in for real. That temporary sparseness would make the sudden change in energy even more dramatic and fulfilling!

  • Draft34
    Draft34 at 2.04 on July 04, 2012 00:02

    @Draft34: are the drums trying to come in here? oh yes they are. I know it's supposed to be subtle, but high passing things would really clean this up.

  • Draft34
    Draft34 on July 04, 2012 00:00

    the thing that i'm missing with this section is a sense of depth. you can fix that with a reverb and/or delay send. Make two slightly different reverb units, and pan them hard left and right, if you can, make something that swaps the panning of the incoming audio. This creates a 'room' for the music to exist in and gives a greater illusion of depth.

  • Draft34
    Draft34 at 1.40 on July 03, 2012 23:53

    are the clicks deliberate? they're not quite rhythmic and not quite textural...

  • Draft34
    Draft34 at 0.53 on July 03, 2012 23:51

    Also it's really overwhelmed by the keyboard patch for my taste.

  • Draft34
    Draft34 at 0.53 on July 03, 2012 23:51

    this field recording/loop of what sounds like footsteps would make an awesome percussive element later on if you locked the steps in with the drums. (But when the Drums come in for real it might be too busy to add anything on top...)

  • Draft34
    Draft34 at 0.11 on July 03, 2012 23:47

    I love this patch! it's really rich and full. it sits in the bass frequencies a little too much though. If you're not already in the habit of doing this, you should start high-pass filtering sound on EVERYTHING that you don't want in the bass range. Even if it doesn't sound like there's much there.

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