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ok i like it so far.
I like this. Very consistant tone. You could have done more with it though. Mabey some breaks and climaxes. Creativity.
I realy like where you where going with this but you just was not neat enough in your transitions from your melodies in this produciton. Mabey stemming from the fact that this is not engineered. But The melodies where consistant in this song. So all in all you its ok. But could have been much better.
I think you could have did less with the poductions but the concept of the song was creative. And the melody was consistant. This was a good song. Good work.
I like that you understand the concept of catchy melodies. It helps to build your fan base. Keep it up. I see you movin.
I actualy loved this.
what concepts are you spittin from. where is the substance
yo i like the beat and the melody. I can see this as a hot southern joint
ok i like your flow but better concepts will be needed
ok i can see where u goin with this
Yo man i got to be honest I was kinda feeling what you puttin out there but I will suggest that you must follow the rules to marketable music. Consistant Melody.
Yo this joint is hot. Your consistant with you concepts. The message is clear. This is a hit, if done right. Im interested in hearing more from this artist. . The lyrical content is commercial, and the melodic properties are hot. Im wit it.
yo this joint was hot, my thing is I think that the lyrical content is good but it could be much better. I belive This song also follows the rules to being a hit. Remember that your audience are the people that enjoy your music they are smarter and require you to be more sophisticated. I see you have it but you must awaken it. Make music for them and you will be GREAT
yo this was got. I wish ya'll would quite playin and get this money, ya'll know what im talking bout. Ride Above That
I love your voice. I get the old school isley brother sound. But over all the song is very inspirational. The chorus and the lyrics are melodical and consistant. Good job.
Hey man I like how clean your vocals are in this track. The lyrical content sends a message, I think that the arrangements could have been a little more interesting but over all you have a great voice so you also have an ability to command the productions. Great Job
Ok i like the groove of the beat. Gives you a very relaxing vibe. The Im glad that you added some color into the hook. Im also glad that you also stayed on subject. Good job with this one. Just makes sure you get your work mixed and mastered and you may have one on your hands if you know what do to with it.
u need to get this mixed and mastered. vocal training will do u some good too
i feel thtat the concept for the song was complementary to the productions. and the song writing could be a lot better. But the arrangements we ok
I love the productions on this track. The track sounds like it could be engineered a lot better.Be sure to spend that little extra money on engineering it makes the difference from a hit and a miss
yo what up g fresh man this is polo, im mos def feelin the productions. I feel that the hoook could and the lyrics could be a lot more creative. But over all i like it.
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adamn I love this beat. I got to know who is on the productions. I like the way that the material compliments the lyrics. This is definitley a hot banga. I got to give it a 9 out 10. Send me your contact please
I realy llike this song, a very soul touch and relaxing song.
I actualy like this song. I think that its a real club banger. I just see it being maketable in the clubs.
a great song great lyrics, and great concepts. very marketable
Its crazy but this song carries a deep undertone meaning and a message that we know all too well. I love the creativity in this song, and i deffinitly connected emotionaly with this song.
I like this dude. You man hit me at Polo@polokeeton.com
What the hell is going on with this beat, it makes me dizzy. Man you got some skills show more passion in your delivery, get more creative hooks for your audience, if your looking for one. and get connected and work with some producers at IdoMusic you can meet them every first Thursday at center stage.
You could have definitley did something different and more creative with the hook, I Like the beat, but i feel that you could have put more feeling in the delivery. But over all it was a 7 out of 10
I would also suggest some vocal training
I feel that you can be more creative in your arrangments. And the hooks arrangements aint realy hittin on nothin
Ok so whats the whole purpose of making music. Is everyone gonna talk about how fresh and how fly you are. I think that in order to keep someone listening to your music, you have to hit them from an emotional level. Being fly and fresh is materialistic level that has been done already. That concept has been marketed out. Give us something that we can related to.Be more intense with your artistry.
I like the arrangments and the chorus. This song has potential, the question is can you make consistant hits that will grab your market...
I like the song. the concept is ok, and its original which makes it interesting. the production is hot but needs to mixed and mastered better. The materialis marketable in the underground circut but has potential
This track has bought its A game. Mixed and mastered is the way to present the material. This provides an upbeat treat for its targeted market, where ever that is.
The production as a whole is just not doing it for me. i like the structure of the male and felmale thing
I feel tha the song writing on this track could have been more constructed and intertesting. There was a lot of repetition in the hook that looses the audience. That is a perfect chance to spread your wings and be creative with your artistry
The word are a very important part of the song and a song must have the right productions to complement the song.I love the concept. I felt that the production could have been more dramatic due to the concept of the material.
I love the productions, she can definatley use some vocal training in my opinion. The writing was a bit imature, but i guess that depends on what the target market is. over all its a 6 in my book