I like how it starts. Beat's good. Infuse a little more toms/Arabian drums. The high pitched xylophone-sounding instrument should be substituted with something more like an electric guitar. Give it a more grindy sound. I hear this like a duet of two instruments, like a rap battle, both trying to outdo each other and compete for props. See how it sounds in G-minor instead.
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