I'm actually excited about this one.Like everything else, it needs a ton of work, but I think it's starting to resemble a real song.Or at least it will if I can find the right vocal melody.

I'm including the original loop for comparison's sake, since there's a fair amount of changes that have occurred since I wrote it.(It hasn't been trimmed, so it's basically 7 minutes of the same thing with a short coda at the end).

Incidentally, the original loop was featured in a short student film which I have unfortunately lost the link to.