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subway-station
Putting an arm around you and that
Winter jacked hugging sound
You disappeared down the staircase
Feeling freezing what I've found
Waiting for trains in the cemetery station
Darting eyes with the homeless men
Taking the E train back to my kingdom
A kingdom like a fountain pen
(if I could stay with you one)
Night, if I could stay with you one
Night, if I could stay with you one
Night, if I could stay with you one night
Putting a key in the wrong door and
Having to talk to my brother instead
Take out the trash and tuck myself in
These sheets and wood aren't my bed
Stay, play, now anyway
Stay, day, now anyway
Stay, may, now anyway
Stay, stay, but anyway
- Tristan B.
Tristan B. at 1.15 on March 12, 2013 03:58
Also the track does come into it's own very well here, this is really good.
- Tristan B.
Tristan B. at 0.37 on March 12, 2013 03:58
I like how you used this melody, the fact that it's super violent femmes-y is just a layer of nostalgia for me which works really well
- Tristan B.
Tristan B. at 1.57 on February 13, 2013 04:39
You sing your lyrics in a cool interesting way that's unique, props.
- Tristan B.
- Tristan B.
Tristan B. at 0.41 on February 13, 2013 04:39
I can't help but think of the Violent Femmes when I hear that guitar riff. It sounds great though. Enjoying your vocals and lyrics as well
- Luke Frazier
Luke Frazier at 2.32 on January 31, 2013 22:34
There's an obvious Smiths feel here, but I'm seeing a lot of twee style stuff like from the C-86 bands in here too! It's just a well made little pop tune. Well done man!
- Curacy
Curacy at 0.45 on January 05, 2013 16:06
There's some offbeat in the guitar (or something) that bothers me. And the panning/reverb could be a bit softer. But overall it's pretty good and I love the lyrics.
- Pro-Status Paeth
- Alpha Law
Alpha Law at 1.05 on January 05, 2013 02:14
The vocals are great, the lyrics are interestingly expressed. The chorus is pretty catchy too, I enjoy this track. Good work!
- ▼3X℥∆©₤¥▼
- spase duk
spase duk at 0.21 on January 05, 2013 00:15
dreamy. vocals need some work. panning is a bit annoying. but nice.
- Koala Party
Koala Party at 1.11 on January 04, 2013 22:25
never really hear guys do dreampop but you really pull it off man.
- Emperor Bear
Emperor Bear at 1.00 on January 04, 2013 21:22
This is the first time I have heard a guy singing dream pop and liked it. Very cool track.
- J Angeles
J Angeles on January 04, 2013 16:11
This song is great. Such a happy sounding song, can't help but smile hahaha. Can't say I love the lyrics but who cares, very nice song regardless.
- mydogsusan
- Millions of Lights
- flon1992
flon1992 at 0.50 on January 04, 2013 04:41
Cool stuff reminds me of Galaxie 500. I'd add some more reverb to the vocals and try to sing less through your nose and with a little more confidence, you do have a pretty good voice.
- buttlegend
- buttlegend
19 Comments
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