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HALCION DAZE on May 24, 2011 00:00

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    So this is my first track, pretty excited to be releasing.
    I took up making my own music about 6 months ago, I think I've been working on this one on and off for three.
    I haven't been able to master it properly, I still have a shitload to learn before I'd call myself a musician, but I figured I'd up this as kind of a milestone, and to get feedback before I obtain some shitty habits.
    Enjoy, looking forward to hear what you think!

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    • Kilimanjaro
    • Kian.tadayoni
      Kian.tadayoni on August 21, 2011 18:50

      Wouldn't be able to describe this more constructively than "beautiful" or something like that.. but it is.. it really is!

    • ||Z-RIDER||
      ||Z-RIDER|| at 0.40 on July 11, 2011 01:01

      nice vocal sampling.... very mount kimbie

    • HALCION DAZE
      HALCION DAZE on May 25, 2011 18:32

      @Stephen W.L.: Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback man, I really appreciate it. I'll definitely keep this stuff in mind, and I agree that I'll have to pay a lot more attention to the frequencies through the process from now on. Good tip on bass mid-range, I'll be sure to make use of that as well :)

    • Stephen W.L.
      Stephen W.L. on May 24, 2011 23:27

      It's a good track, especially coming from someone who does not call themselves a musician ( yet :] )

      Here's the criticism:
      - Shorten the intro, when the beat backs down at :52 it's very disappointing! Hit us!
      - Maybe a stronger pad/lead in the back at 1:08, or manipulate/automate the bass in this section to give some depth
      - Same goes for the section at 2:02, as it progresses, bring the bass to the front (if you've got a low-pass filter, or you've EQed it to the low-end, bring out the mid-range sound of the bass to build the track)
      - The breakdown at 2:50 needs more interest, get more emphasis on the high-end! Get some high-passed synths in there maybe, or a good sample. I would use something like a bell or a high string, but that's just me)

      That's all I got, keep at it.

    • HALCION DAZE
      HALCION DAZE at 0.20 on May 24, 2011 12:40

      @sumiandthegoat: Haha, yup

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