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Renegade Theory Review, share tips and critique
Please give your suggestions. Need to re-edit the bass in parts and create more interest, but interested to hear other suggestions.
- Jones FoSho
Jones FoSho at 4.31 on January 05, 2010 20:42
@dvorkru: still one of my favourites... an amazing track. looking back into this i think i commented too much, many ideas i threw in were completely right (and i still agree with them) but i'm still feeling the tune a lot. therefore i think i was a bit nickpicky, you asked for reviews and suggestions but what this track deserves is praise.
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- Professor West
Professor West at 4.03 on October 01, 2009 15:59
Quite an emotional track. I like it very much and I think you have improved quite a bit as a producer! Keep up the good work!
- Professor West
- djsAro
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 3.12 on August 26, 2009 11:04
the sitar works nicely. it catches the overall mood of the track. good work.
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 4.29 on August 26, 2009 11:03
mmm.. another idea... have you tried doing this track, but a bit slower?? like say at dub tempo (70) or even slower. it'd leave more room for the rolly drums to work out and perhaps it would give a more spacey chilled feeling... just an idea.
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 4.31 on August 26, 2009 11:00
well, perhaps i commented too much, ccriticizing things and all of that, but all i have to say is that i really liked this. moody, dark, that sitar was ace, the percussion was really cool... the things i have said were ideas that came to mind as i was listening to the track....
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 4.17 on August 26, 2009 10:57
well, everything i gotta say bout the bass hass been said before by the other guys.
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 3.51 on August 26, 2009 10:55
oh so that was the distorted drums!!! some fucked up bongos!!!
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 2.56 on August 26, 2009 10:54
perhaps the percussion on the top has a little too much volume on some parts.
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 2.28 on August 26, 2009 10:52
having that said, i really like the way you used the kick, it is there, you can tell, but it doesnt have that presence in the mix... have you tried a different version with more kick?? well, perhaps it would change the mood of the track completely.
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 2.10 on August 26, 2009 10:48
the drums perhaps need to be less separated... i mean, i can hear two main clearly different parts: some 'distorted' rolly drums and the 'burial-esque' percussion on the top. perhaps some exchange in between the two would be good-separating the distorted part in pieces or perhaps distorting some hits of the hi end percussion... i dont know how to express it..
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 1.55 on August 26, 2009 10:38
wow. loving that burial-esque percussion.
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 1.32 on August 26, 2009 10:37
perhaps add a lil bit of movement to that drum roll
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 0.59 on August 26, 2009 10:37
epic drop. loving the echoey synths at the back.... really nice.
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 0.40 on August 26, 2009 10:36
there you go. i felt like it needed something like that "horn" that came into
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru at 0.29 on August 26, 2009 10:33
perhaps separating the melodic part of this part (in this case it is the bass) between a more solid bass and some mid pads would be nice. not talking about mid-range-pendu-synths ya know.
- Eneko Jones FoSho/dvorkru
- djsAro
djsAro at 4.22 on August 18, 2009 16:13
Thanks guys. I really appreciate the feedback. Hard to get sometimes so thank you much for chiming in.
- djsAro
djsAro at 3.27 on August 18, 2009 16:10
I think that's a compliment. I love the term "stupidly good". Thanks.
- djsAro
djsAro at 2.43 on August 18, 2009 16:09
Working on that sub base technique. Thanks for the feedback.
- inaudible
inaudible on August 17, 2009 22:56
just to repeat what others have said here, the drums are winner
great mood to the track
- Royal Brown (KFSFK)
Royal Brown (KFSFK) at 2.43 on August 15, 2009 17:48
here is where i am talking about, and i realize that is a synth not your bass, i want a deeper sub for your bass (or just more presence) and i want that synth pulled up some. not to steal focus from the perc or the koto, but to bring more presence to the whole track.
- Royal Brown (KFSFK)
Royal Brown (KFSFK) at 4.22 on August 15, 2009 17:47
@djsAro: i don't know t-bird, but i can say that the only way that it is at all unfocused to me is that it could use the bass being pulled up a little. would give it a little more backbone which would make it feel less airy and unfocused. when the koto or zither sound is the driving sound and it is meandering in its rhythm it feels unfocused... that should be the lead part but not the driving part. not when you have such great drums and perc and not when you have that sick bassline esp with the filters in the second break(ish area)... does that make sense?
- Royal Brown (KFSFK)
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