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Another soundcloud collaboration. Played around with this instrumental track Hoedown (Instrumental) by JohnStuart and I"M SO EXCITED at the result. I think it turned out great! I just need to keep practicing singing it and repost when I'm more confident with the lyrics, this was a really rough take where I didn't forget words, so I just wanted to share the progress. ;)
Lyrics by Denise Bisharat:
All I
Ever wanted
Was everything
There ever was
And I believed it was all with you
What a fool
We know
There's nothing inside of me
For you to
Be attached to
I am made of broken parts
That barely stick together
I never would choose this
But it's getting better I guess
It's getting better I guess
The more of you I see less
The better it gets
Every time I stand in the rain
I feel it
Soaking in
And yeah I still feel the pain
But I'm just so
Used to it
Your garden won't grow
In my poisoned dirt
I started to smoke
But it doesn't hurt
Go and take a long ride
On your back-hoe
Don't look back though
Don't look back-nooo....
It's getting better I guess
It's getting better I guess
It's getting better I guess
It's getting better I guess
The more of you I see less
The better it gets
All I ever wanted
Was everything
There ever was
And I believed
It was all with you....
- Sad Girls Club
Sad Girls Club at 0.29 on October 03, 2012 16:26
@DRSOUNDCLOUD: THANK YOU! Appreciate the feedback. The original was an instrumental and I just loved the sound and felt like I needed to try putting some vocals on it. ;)
- DRSOUNDCLOUD
DRSOUNDCLOUD at 0.29 on October 03, 2012 07:17
This sounds like a western instantly, like a bar brawl.. I happen to think that's pretty dope
- Sad Girls Club
Sad Girls Club at 1.56 on October 03, 2012 03:28
So far this is the best I've ever done on mixing my own vocals. ;)
- Sad Girls Club
Sad Girls Club at 0.00 on October 03, 2012 02:41
Hoedown (Instrumental) by JohnStuart
Here's the original instrumental by jj_stuart
The lyrics were modified from a poem I wrote when I was 17. ;) Enjoy and feedback is always nice! <3
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