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Beautiful Noise beautiful music made with bleeps, hisses, clicks, clunks, pops, scratches, glitches, zips, feedback, white, pink and black sound, distortion... random and abstract noise!
LLOM remastered Goddess Reprisal after listening to the track and hearing other drums and noise in there too. I really love this version. The sound of those skins is quality. Hope you enjoy this remix.
- Dave Migman
Dave Migman at 0.02 on May 14, 2013 21:08
Lyrics: The Goddess Reprisal i've been putting in a lot of miles
to touch the sky and the ocean
from vault to bedrock
clinging to pinnacles like a raven
folded wing under scurrying skies
down to the singing pebbles
an eel amongst each temporal undulationmy toes are lined with hard skin
old blisters turn white
(my snow capped toes)
the veins are pronounced
across the bones
every sore is a medal to meup through the undergrowth, hanging vines
the humid air of limestone paths
slippery with dark clay
the woodpeckers taping out their codes
so alive it is still.there, in the woods
the white sow runs
her grunts soothe the trees
she is as big as a bull
with the grace of a finch
her eyes flash
green in the nightthis wolf is padding the track
he is alone, content
for the mountain cast displays
of sparks and fires
clouds are vortexes of wonder
animated sequences
of lost stories
of times he had
yet to comethe old god faces stare down from
their roosts, the trees are stunning
parasols , their leaves
and needles glowing in the stillness
outside my window
the oranges are
greenthere is a rhythm to his stride
the mountain wears a diadem of gold
each evening the birds
bicker their love songs across
the gorge, down from
the steeps, to the old walls
and their secrets. eels
carouse the cold water of the
river, their eyes are clearnow the swallows offer me their
rubies and the jay her fingers,
gloriously speckled. the goddess
will rise, pregnant
with white fire and cosmic sperm, she will
draw the waters close and the
madness will be pronounced upon
the kingdom of her reignthe moon is a token
of the goddess' reprise
swollen and bloody - Dave Migman
- NYTE EEGLE
NYTE EEGLE at 1.47 on February 23, 2013 15:10
great imagery,, incredible poetic delivery... -- very nice, Dave
- Dave Migman
- Spleen Erebus
Spleen Erebus at 1.31 on February 18, 2013 08:17
Dave,i heard this last night and it's awesome.So much like the story you wrote and LLOM did a interesting job.
- M Jeffrey Sampson
M Jeffrey Sampson at 2.25 on February 18, 2013 05:18
@Dave Migman: I have to agree with Michael here - I'd prefer the voice to be more upfront in the mix.
- Dave Migman
Dave Migman at 2.25 on February 17, 2013 19:39
@LLOM: Me, I love them both, but I must admit, I really do like that extra boom and the sound of those skins, really LLOM it makes me salivate every time I hear that sound.
- LLOM
LLOM at 2.25 on February 17, 2013 14:03
@swampmessiah: Very true man. I brought the intro volume up because some of the sounds I added were hiding the words. I didn't do that for the main part. I also felt the same way when comparing the two versions, the volume dynamics in the original are awesome. The words are the most important to me as well but my intention was to have the drums follow what is said. So I decided if you can still understand the words it'll be OK. Thanks very much for your comments I shall keep them in mind.
- swampmessiah
swampmessiah at 2.25 on February 16, 2013 16:37
I like that the volume on your voice is more consistent between the two parts but would still like it turned up. I like the composition and arrangement but the primary interest, to me, is always your voice/words.
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