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remember-me-1
Finished Version of this song, damn accidental reverb may have fucked it up though.
Drop C Capo 4
I wrote this song in the persona of someone who is writing their suicide note. The note seeks to comfort the person's loved ones by listing off his negative characteristics, which are part of the reasons the person has for killing themselves. Happy happy
lyrics
Remember me, as I was
Impatient and cold
Don't rose tint me because
I won't grow old
Forget me not
Forget me soon
Can't live without you
Your touch, Is my crutch
Can't live without you
Think of me
Only when you have to
Don't cry when you can't hear my laugh any more
When I see sad eyes
Rolling down your face
It makes me feel like I've fallen
Far from your grace
Forget me not
Forget me soon
Can't live without you
Your touch, Is my crutch
Can't live without you
If not for you
I don't know what I would do
When everything is broken
Nothing can be done
The game is long since finished
But neither of us won
And I don't know where I'm going now
A room of darkness or my head bowed down
But I know the one thing left to do
Is say I really, really, really want you.
- Conor Deegan
Conor Deegan at 0.36 on November 30, 2012 01:18
@Koto Gramica: Hey, Cheers! had never actually heard that song before I looked it up there. does kinda sound like this song haha
- Koto Gramica
Koto Gramica at 0.36 on November 30, 2012 00:44
sounds like thinking about you by radiohead. not that is a bad thing. Loving this.
- Conor Deegan
Conor Deegan at 0.43 on November 29, 2012 01:19
@Biko: thanks! fairly self concious about my voice so it's always nice to hear
- Conor Deegan
- Conor Deegan
Conor Deegan at 0.22 on November 29, 2012 01:18
@ChiefWhiteHorse: do you mean the rhythm pattern or do you reckon I'm making mistakes? just want to know, the timing for that song is kinda odd anyway loike
- Conor Deegan
Conor Deegan at 2.00 on November 27, 2012 19:23
@ChiefWhiteHorse: I used audacity and a studio projects little square mic for it. single track. great mic actually if you're shopping
- ChiefWhiteHorse
ChiefWhiteHorse at 2.00 on November 27, 2012 03:27
Nice clean tone throughout though, what do you record on?
- ChiefWhiteHorse
ChiefWhiteHorse at 1.14 on November 27, 2012 03:27
I like your strum pattern, but maybe throw in some staccato?
- ChiefWhiteHorse
ChiefWhiteHorse at 0.22 on November 27, 2012 03:27
I like the chord progression, but some of the hesitation between the chord changes is a little jarring. It's not so much the hesitation as the inconsistency.
- Biko
- SoulCrusher
- Future Fauna
Future Fauna at 0.58 on November 02, 2012 23:22
song is great, maybe project your voice more though. nice chord changes
- Victor Florence
Victor Florence at 2.22 on November 02, 2012 21:52
this is great! kind of reminds me of Jeff Buckley in how you deliver your vocals
- Conor Deegan
Conor Deegan at 1.06 on November 02, 2012 21:33
@The Sleightest: Hmm, that's a cool idea actually, I'll deffo give that a go next time I'm recording. thanks for the feedback!
- The Sleightest
The Sleightest at 1.06 on November 02, 2012 21:27
I'd recommend adding a bit of reverb to your vocals, or turn it up a bit if you are using it already. The vocals are good but I feel like they would be more ambient/dreamy with reverb and it would contrast the crispness of the guitar
- Conor Deegan
Conor Deegan at 2.23 on November 02, 2012 21:08
@Ben Fishman: Cheers! yeah no worries, I used a Studio projects 'little square mic' and audacity. then I just recorded it all live and put on some reverb. Simples :)
- Ben Fishman
Ben Fishman at 2.23 on November 02, 2012 21:03
Really enjoyed this track, I like your voice and your guitar play is good, too. Mind if I ask which microphone you used?
- KYVZ
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