The voices and script were great. Very believable. But I feel like you could have shortened the song moments, seeing as this is thirteen minutes long. I like the idea, but maybe make it have a bit more of a plot to it? But I guess the point is that there isn't really a plot.
A little too much dead space.
Again, great voice acting/script.
Edit out that little bump! I'm guessing it came from you pushing the "stop" button on the field recorder.
Maybe add some sound effects here?
You might want to shorten this part.
Too loud! I know you're trying to go for a certain effect here, but make sure you don't contrast the sound levels too much.
I like how your script's so believable.
Is this MGMT?
Watch your levels! This is pretty loud.
Good acting! I like the voices.
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