I really like how you guys have made it sound. Once we get it properly would be good to up tempo to give it a bit more, how you say...oomph! ;) x

I have a lil bridge worked out for here but havent worked out chords yet but should be easy as its not very long! x

Def needs sort sort of ending! lol x Thanks Peeps! x

Would like a break down here beginning of verse

Maybe once round on solo

Harmonies here maybe? Ive got some bvs that have we could try aswell x

Could have a call and response with sax and lyrics as a lil gaps before each verse begins. I have also wrote a very simple bridge x

I cant stop listening, you guys did a fab job :) xxx