Maybe half way through this melody could be the start of the transition into the next section? Really like it but feels like it goes on too long without anything changing
Really love this melody.
Feels like the intro goes on for one bar too long, maybe shorten it by these last 8 beats?
As the track will be looping, make sure it doesn't sound too odd jumping from the end back to the start, maybe bring back in one of the beats from the start into the end to make that transition easier?
I like this new beat, but maybe the transition could be smoother? Maybe keep the melody from the previous section going until the drums kick in later
Really don't like the crash here, it sounds a bit messy. The first couple could be ok if maybe a little quieter but the last 6 in quick-succession don't seem to fit
The sharp hits trail off a little quickly
@LandanLloyd: It feels a little bit like a few samples that have been cut together, just need to feel a bit more fluid and filled out :)
As an overview. I like the sound and the separate sections, I think they can work really well if we can get some good transitions and flesh each one out. I think it all feels like it needs fleshing out a bit as it’s mostly just drums and melody, mostly think it needs something like a bass line to fill it in a bit, or maybe multiple melodies or variations in the drums/extra drum bits, I don't really know what but it definitely feels a bit hollow. If you think it's gonna be too much work getting all three sections independently to sound fleshed out we can work back down to one or two sections, whatever you think you can do in the timescale :) I think it would be best to get a short bit nailed then a long bit as a work in progress. Bear in mind the 2-3min gameplay length, can tighten each section to keep the movement of the track in keeping with the speed of the game if you think that will work.
Feels like it's building up to something, wonder if we could add a drop or something? Again you're the musician :)
Transition needs work, I'm not sure what to suggest.
Really like this melody and drums.
Feels like it could use another level, bring another melody or something?
Really like this melody, maybe switch up the drums a bit to match?
Gets a bit random here, we want to keep it flowing a bit better. Bit more Daft Punk & Skrillex than James Blake :)
Sounds a bit out of time?
I like these sounds, but they start and cut off pretty sharply and sound a bit disjointed. Not sure what to suggest?
This note sounds a bit off
Intro is pretty long, it's gonna be a pretty casual game so maybe cut the time between transitions? I expect a game wont last much more than a couple of minutes most of the time so we would want to get a full loop in before then? We don't need to cut it down to a specific time, but maybe shorted some sections so it progresses faster.
Really like the drum beat
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